Sense-able Writing
Looking for a quick way to jazz up your story?
Lay off your eyes.
Really.
Give your ears, nose, mouth and fingers a greater role in your
writing.
We writers know that it’s our job to use juicy details so
our readers feel
they are right there with our characters when we set the
stage. But sometimes we
rely too heavy on showing what the stage "looks" like. Let’s say we are describing a bonfire gathering deep in the woods. We've got five
senses to paint this picture, not one, in our writer’s toolbox. We can relay the smell of smoke and
pine-tinged air, the sound of owls hooting, the touch of crunchy leaves on the
ground, and the gooey-oh-so-good taste of s’mores. The more we add these other
senses, the richer – and realer -- our writing becomes.
Next time you are writing, give this a try: Describe a scene
using your other senses
first before adding sight details. Close your eyes if you have to! Your writing
will be
more sense-able. Promise.
Do you “see” my point?
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